Comments on Child's Play by Metaphoric Spurs

nesdil

wow..I love how you turned a simple story line into such a suspenseful ending..
love4evr
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:07:45.
THX 0477

Hilarious, and a nice, subtle depiction of a feeling familiar to all parents, the need to give ‘em a little shove every once in a while, for their good and yours.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:07:45.
emma jo_234

I agree with THX 0477 ….This was cute and kind of bouncy in a way. The bit shiny orange plastic cheery made me think “bubbly” and “bouncy.” I like it.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:07:45.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

yeah, I agree with THX also, he needs that shove, and then I think, a hug.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:07:45.
flute faerie

Awww, this is really cute and simple. I like it.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:07:45.
White Hat

Sadly, I don’t think I can describe precisely what makes this so enjoyable.

THX is on the right track, though.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:07:45.