Wow, that’s really amazing. I love how you suggest that there are more details outside the story, subtly. Like the last line.
ya who cares? live in the now! woo!the ending IS AMAZING
i want to know more!! this is an awesome piece.
Interesting. I almost don’t want to know what happened eight years ago. Then again. It will show her strength in moving on. Way to go!
Awesome! I love all the detail. I also want to know about her past. What happened on the playground?
what happened what happened what happened..[awesome job, btw]=]
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