“Teardrop” – Massive Attack

Oh, she has to stay, she’ll ruin it, everything was so special! I like the lines, She didn’t know this world. It wasn’t her. She wanted it to be her so badly but it wasn’t. Keep going, please! I want to know what happens, and I’d like to hear more about Bec, too, cause I want to see who she is in this story. But I will have to wait until the time is right, I guess. But please, write more!
LoA

Never heard the song, but great job working it into the story and even maintaining the fragmented style. The result was very thoughtful and downright poetic.
LoA

I recognized the lyrics straight off. That’s a great song, and this is a great ficlet.