It was supposed to be a song…that’s why there are italics in odd places and some words go “a-at,” for example.

That’s beautiful. Yeah, I guessed it was a song even before the comment, because of the italics and stuff…I’ve never been able to write songs, so I have great respect for those who can.
LoA

Wow, I think that this is beautifully written. Well done!

very nice emma!!
I was trying to sing it lol..but me trying to sing only ends up with one word…..Disaster!!