I love this. I agree w/ wytherwings. This is my fav line, cuz it totally applies to my life: What if you could reverse time, to that special time when everything was perfect? Would you? I wouldnt, sometimes you just have to live with what happened and whats happening.
Wow. That was very powerful. I agree with everyone, you are a wonderful writer. One of my favorite lines is the concluding sentence: Everybody has a road in life, some just need to find it for many reasons I won’t get into. Anyway, great great great job
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