Cute and sweet, with a nice rhythm to it.
LoA

This is beautiful, really beautiful. And you made it rhyme without seeming corny…which I can never seem to do. Before the last line, I was thinking it almost sounded like a poem you would leave for someone after you killed yourself…but then with the last line, obviously not. I love this!
LoA

I like how you used ”/” those in it to give adifferent look.. it was so sweet and good!