my only inspiration is to be soon getting my drivers license and getting the hell outta here. :DD

Interesting. I love an internal struggle, I do. This one’s a little hard to understand. They’re supposed to be…for the character. He’s stuck in a rut…and he can’t get himself out because in thinking of something to get himself out, he would be?
I’m sad that I don’t quite get it. So close, yet so far.
AH! AWESOME ! You’ve conveyed what your character’s feeling to the reader! In a way all your own. Still, one who doesn’t enjoy analysation as much as I may not like this piece.

LoA

That was very, very, good. The internal struggle was very clear, and the universal themes are a good addition. Way to go! Five stars :)
-Cat the Dancing Mouse

Very good writing, I like the struggle. I hope someday he will get some inspiration, b/c life w/out inspiration is sad.