wow, thatz pretty cool~ do u still live life to the fullest? i hope u do!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is not bad. I especially liked the second line. It made my eyes bug out. Very poetic.

I’m glad this had a nice little twist to the mood.

LoA

I really like that!!!! I have a challenge about New Year’s resolutions and this would be a great entry if you’re interested.

This is really cute and flows nicely. Good job!