Good Idea…But you might want to spell check/grammar check this…

I wrote this for one reason to spread my hate for christmas and how much cooperation has killed it. so i wrote the story to show a darker side to christmas

ummm…. a BIG christmas nightmare

i like this one. the weird thing i liked about this story when you said the stuff about the gun and the throat. you might want to check your spelling and grammar. but other han that is was very interesting.