Enjoy:
I wrote this poem a long time ago for a boy…Though it’s supposed to be a boy speaking to a girl. It was sort of my fantasy of what he would say to me. Of course, I is myself. And you is him. This is probably the best poem I’ve written. Please rate and comment…Or even send a note! Thank you….Cat the Dancing Mouse

This is a really great poem~ I wouldn’t ever dream of writing something like this, especially to a boy!! u make me bring bak good memories sigh =) 5 stars!!!!!

Aww…that’s so awesome! I love it! It’s pretty but not sappy, it’s light but not happy-go-lucky. I really, really like this. oh and great title.

I love this poem. It brings back some memories for me.
5stars

But maybe that’s just me….

My attempt at a rhyming last line :)
Perhaps that would be too many characters? :)

Great poem! Easy to read, Easy to follow, and Great metaphors. I like the persistence you want from the boy. Because you want him to want you and to fight for you confidently against anything you say against your own relationship. To prove the existence of his feelings for you. Marvelous!

Oooo I like it. But maybe that’s just me…
Hmm…I would use it…But you made it up. Lol. And I kind of like how the last one doesn’t rhyme…Perhaps write a sequel?
Thanks everyone for the comments :)