Awww! That was wonderful! Your description of needing to be needed and wanting to be special is excellent. This is a wonderful poem…and maybe a possible song. Congratulations! Five stars all the way. Keep writing (please?)!
—Cat the Dancing Mouse

this is great, love it!!!!

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lol i totally agree with Cat

OMG !! This is beautilful!!

!! This really, really is beautiful, and like Cat noted, a potential song. If you added a chorus here and there…hey, that would be fun! You should do a sequel with choruses or something…anyhow, I’m getting sidetracked here, just wanted to say that this is absolutely amazing. It’s funny, because I just read Cat’s Love Letter and she said that so many Ficlets here touched people…well, this is one of those. Bravo. And it really would make a good song. ;]]

Wow, this is really touching!! I like this a lot ♥

Wow, this is really touching!! I like this a lot ♥

“Your Guardian Angel”
- Red Jumpsuit Apparatus

this is really good!

thanks for all of the great comments people!! =) I’m not to great at the whole song writing concept, but if anyone else really wants to try and turn it into a song, feel free.