Oooo very captivating. Nice job :) Five Stars.

This is nice. I recently used a rug metaphor in a piece on marriage, too. I want to see more of what this rug looks like.

Nicely done, a neat, contained little allegory for a relationship gone wrong.
LoA
And neat pen name, by the way—I have a whole book I’m working on tentatively titled ‘The Reverie”.

Thank you! I appreciate all the wonderful feedback! t wait to read that book of yours! =] !