The tense seems strange to me, also etc not ect. Um, not into this. Maybe I should read the pre-ficlets.

Hmmm, I hope you have great plans for Thora, Hillary, and Chris in this series, because you’ve created a strong sense of relationship, and apprehension and relief in reading the whole series. I’m prepared for the next exciting sequence of events.

Ya, keep going I caught up = )

mistrust, conflict, the stuff that makes a story great. keep up the great work, i am an admirer of your writing and you created wonderfully real characters, can’t wait for the next installments.