uh oh, what will the children find?
You paint a vivid description.

i cann see clearrly noww :]
hehee. anyways. excellent descriptions.

you have some spelling errors, please correct them.

Sorry mask, didnt know ficlets was a spelling test!

Next time send me a note, about my grammer. I believe these comments should be about the story, I didnt write this to see what you think about my spelling.

You do paint a beautiful picture. I cant wait to see where this goes.

Nice Icon btw! Well, i guess typing in “Moon” on the icon page isnt that wierd at all!