Oh no! That was tragic, really tragic. But very well done. The descriptions of her were spot on for conveying that mix of excitement, anxiety, and dread.
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Oh dear, that’s so sad! You have very good descriptions though.
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Wow this sounds exactly like a girl I know named Simone…she tends to get very nervous too. Great story, very vividly written.

Oh! That’s sad…and I agree with what THX said. This is great!
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