this is a lot like me. ‘cept… different circumstances. awesome!

I know how you feel. This is something I will carry forever, knowing there is someone who knows how I feel. All I want to do is dance.

lovely piece, i really like the metaphor that i’m reading. the struggle to dance as a free creature just moving with no inhibitions but at the same time yearning for the dance one has known all their lives and cherished. well, that’s what i got. lovely piece, well written, very though provoking and emotional.

`emily.

love it! sounds like those ficlets are getting a little brighter! you must love to dance!

I liked how real you paint the ballerina scene—no doubt from everyday experience. Certain words that if I were to write this story i’d have to research, such as barre, pointe, Plies, Jetes, although I did know leotard.lol. And the ula flower, very appropriate word choices made this story great.

really good, love it. although I’m not the best dancer, I feel like I can connect, because I do love the performing arts.

hey im a dancer too!!! i like this story.

i don’t dance, but i want to get into hiphop, so i’ll get there maybe, if i have time=p
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very emotional and touching story, loved it!=]