Enjoy! Please post comments+Rate. :)
—Cat the Dancing Mouse

Woah sorry! I did include the whole poem. Okay, now please rate and ect. Thanks!
—Cat the Dancing Mouse

Wow. Wow, wow, wow, that’s all I can say. This is beautiful. It flows so well…And all I really wanted/Was for me to forget/’Cause with your memory gone/I’d have nothing to regret. So, so poetic, and so bittersweet. This should be a song. In fact, I’m very jealous. I try to write songs and they never sound quite right.

You should totally make this a song!!! This is really pretty and very poetic.

nice. i love it! you should make it a song. i try but they never sound this good.

aparently im not the only one who thought this was a song.. For some reason it remineded me of a Vanessa Carilton song..
Now, that is what I call poetry. If only mine had your grace and stability. Job well done!

Final version (for now) is now posted! Thanks to everyone who posted..and the certain people who gave me the will to write. Thanks again :)

i really like it and i think you should write more like this.