I’m glad she’s safe, I know she’s fictional, but April’s plight got to me. when the mother brushed the hair away from her daughter’s eyes, that was such a real moment of tenderness,

wow. thats all i can say. i love it. you really did well. this story would mean alot to those people out there who are in that situation.

Sure glad i’ve never been beaten, or my mom. i got a great Dad. This guy sound like a terror on wheels as my grandmom says.

Whew! Safety at last! I love the simple dialogue showing April’s youth.