I like the subtle and detailed descriptions that you have in it, for example, the fact that you put that the coke was luke-warm. It moves a bit quickly, so I don’t know if it completely drew me in has-me-begging-for-a-sequel, but I am certainly interested in where you take it, and I’ll watch for one.

eeeeeeeeeeeeep sequel please please please please please!!!!!

I think that I start most of my days at work the same way! The ending was a nice twist.