It doesn’t make much sense really, but it almost does, hence the name. Theres a loose connection between verses, and interpretation is left to the creative :P
I like this ALOT J . It does make some kind of sence. You really need to write more. your really good.
Nice work. hints at meaning and depth. Its a tease. I feel used by your poetry. Nice.
Frostbite
Brebelles
David B