Very nice. The scene has good description, and the suspense is excellent!

I can hear the bike and her breathing. I can see her flying hair. Great suspenseful story!

The description is amazing, truly top-notch. You got my attention.

LoA

this is amazing. i love it. sequel please!

your descriptions are the best, the words you use. flowery and descriptive i see the action in my minds eye.

I’m so happy I discovered you. I love your writing style!