I really like this, the tone. The style’s fantastic; I love how use just enough slang so that you can easily get a feel of the character and see what he’s like, while still making it easy to read.
It’s so easy to identify with the narrator and understand what he’s going through. The ending is a real twist, too.
The only real critique I could have is that the ending is kind of confusing. Who’s easy? Why was He so nasty [‘now bury him’].
kells