so short, but yet you managed to convey so much into it. Fantastic! =)

wow! gerr u r like the poet master!!

thats really good
its like a poem about the way life is sorta i think
idk…lol i’m just saying its good
haha
ps – i didn’t know u had a ficlets! u shuda told me! =)

woww, and you say i’m good? have you read your own stuff?