In the second paragraph in the second line that ‘was certainly’ should be ‘were certainly’
or ‘certainly were’—stuffily speaking grammatically.
I’m loving this string of ficlets you’ve got going.

Thank you for your continuing grammaticall help!:):)

I like that she (he?) actually thought about the color of her shirt, something I would never have the presence of mind to do in such a situation. I’m liking this series, can’t wait to see where it goes!
LoA