Wow! I totally know what you mean, and I love this, it’s really beautiful. There’s more I want to say but I’m not sure how…Great job!
LoA

Wow. Still struggling, eh? Not that you could call this mastery struggling, but I judge upon what it was surely inspired by. This had that lullaby feel that I so love…twinged with sadness and frustration. I bit like a sunset. I loved it. Wonderful job, and hang in there. People change, yes, but that’s for the better…even if it doesn’t seem that way at first.
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* whaaat iiii’ve doooone, i face myself.. to cross out what i’ve beeeguuun, erase myself.. and let go of whaaat ii’ve dooone. *
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this is beautful/awesome! great job, really touching/deep.

Wow. That is all I can say, and I hope it sums up what I mean. It is amazing, touching, and deep. It’s… wow.