Oh, I love this, I really do! It’s a perfect sequel, definitely. And it really means a lot to me that you liked my story enough to write a sequel! This is amazing!
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Your last line ties it all together beautifully! I love how the character is like the flower, you really did get hung on metaphors!

Whoa, the last line is like…perfect.

Impressive imagery and a nice message to it as well.
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