very interesting, a little hard to follow because it’s all one big paragraph, but an intriguing piece nonetheless. i definitely want to read on.

I added some carriage returns. Does that help? I begrudge every space that I must use as it’s so hard to fit into the alloted space.

Hilarious, so serious and then, Oops. That word can be such an unfortunate punctuation to so many situations.
LoA