very,very nice very passion-like

It’s great that you rhymed this, however…they seem a little forced. Some of it was funny. I’m sorry if it wasn’t supposed to be. The last line of the second stanza just struck me as funny. I’m a weirdo, though…don’t listen to me. If I tried to rhyme a poem, it wouldn’t even be worth one star, so kudos for the effort and for rhyming.

LoA