I have to write a sequel to this because I haven’t even gotten to my place yet, or used the 5 senses, but I wanted it to have the introduction so everybody could understand better.

I read started reading this before you even put up the bit in the comment about it having a sequel, and I wondered where the end was! Good to know it’s not over. Interested to see the end! :)

Interesting, with a very real feel of adolescence to it. Nicely done.
LoA

I can’t wait!