Very interesting, and well written! No less than I would expect from you.

woah! cool!

It was just gettin good! (starts chanting) sequel, sequel, sequel….

Good job conveying her sense of frustration that he, despite how highly she holds him, cannot see these fantastical things. Nicely told, taut and intense.
LoA

excellently done! It’s sad he can’t see them, at least he believes her… sigh… SEQUEL !!!