Beautiful. I realize the sequels change it from the beautiful thing you started it as. But it is truly beautiful.

Hmm. Wish I could edit that comment. Hadn’t noticed before the first sequel was written by you. Oops.

It’s okay. I wrote both of these at very different times… different circumstances. I was thinking of writing another one where the baby survives…idk.

Very nice, but I’m not certain from this piece who the narrator is.