Amazing as per usual! The awkward kiss thing was really cute and sweet too!

Ooh let me guess, he can see everything like she can now. lol. The plot unfolds, anyways… SEQUEL !!! (Oh, is awkwardity a word?)

Wow. I am officially the slowest person in the world. I had to re-read each sequel a couple of times before I realized he was blind. Boy, do I feel stupid.
Moving on, I really like this! It’s very sweet. Great job.

Sorry to make you feel slower, but he’s not blind. By “see”, I mean “see spirits”. He’s blind to what she sees, which is immensely more than most people, if that’s what you mean. He does have actual eye trouble, but I haven’t said it yet (well, now I have…)