ahh! i hpe yew all like my poem but pretty please post a comment!

I liked it some i got kinda confuzzled but i am just weird…. it was really sweet and sad….

Where the character stands is kind of shifty…which is what it’s supposed to be. However, it’s not clearly “should I stay or should I go?” I like it, none the less. It’s got impressive rhythm.
LoA

I love it! It’s amazing! Keep on writing!