Ooo, nice symbolism. I like how he’s happening upon himself in a way. However, please watch your use of apostrophes. You still get 5 stars for the imagery.
LoA

Love how you made the mansion, with the dust clouds. 2 thumbs up!

This is really good. Remember us small people when your a famous author. lol. BTW , I love the name of this story.

i love stairways your not to sure were they are headed till you get to the top. i like the winding ones.
waiting….on the first step…