Very emotional, and a nice expression of a viewpoint.
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well sorry to counter it but she could of had that baby, look at the movie ‘Juno’.

It was still good though and sad. It is a gray area and the her mother must of not let her have it. For that her mom is the murderer.

Very deep, saddening, emotionally packed a whallop, among the best you’re written. So glad I’m a guy, I do not know how girls/women bear the burdens of life decisions on their shoulder, giving birth, rasing children. Women/mothers: the hands that rock the cradle rule the world. HRC 2008 !!!!!!!!

As a mother, I can’t stand that sign. It makes me want to vomit. I still feel sorry for your character because she feels remorse and seems to have been forced to go through the abortion. A very emotional story.

that sign brought me to tears.
then i had to go and read this.
wonderful job.

this is wonderful and shows a different view point very well, of course with me being anti-abortion, it is very hard for me to understand it, but still a defiant point was made here, and it was beautiful.

very emotional, very very touching, very very great job.

This is beautiful. I wish that others could be as insightful as you are.

You took a controversial topic and made it into something we could relate to, whether we’re male or female, for or against abortion. I think any reader would feel sympathy for your character.

I don’t know what to say. Beautiful.

wow.. very powerful story I hope its fiction. You made this person real. I instantly felt for her. As if it was my friend. The imagry with the poster and your vivid story really mesh perfectly. Your delivery is powerful and it has such conviction! Job well done!