Wow, surreal and jarring. Takes a considerable amount of thought and leaves lots of questions, but definitely pulls up some emotions. Whatever the situation is, it’s not good. Neat idea. LoA
I’ve gotten into writing out dream sequences again. What you see is usually how they come to me – non-sequitorial yet finely detailed snippets of WTF . It’s trickier to successfully convey in words than one might imagine.
yeah, wow. does sound very dream like, well, speaking from my own sense of dreams. kind of like when you’re dreaming and you know where you are but its completely different from how you know it to be, yeah. brilliant.
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