“I lifted the toilet lid and screamed.. That is part of my daily wake up ritual.” I liked this line. Also, the story has potential. Nice work!
“I lifted the toilet lid and screamed.. That is part of my daily wake up ritual.”
I liked this line. Also, the story has potential. Nice work!
I like the mix of fantasy and just everyday normal life :) CuteS.J.
I like the mix of fantasy and just everyday normal life
:)
CuteS.J.
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