I like “Come hither and be awesome!” but that’s just me.
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A bit of a saucy rallying cry, but not bad. And I love your jump to a prequel instead of the expected sequel. I love the last day of school scene, and Billy and Ben’s interaction was spot on, I thought, total boys of that age range…um, the age range I envisioned.
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snappy kid dialogue.
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