Oh, oh oh. It’s beautiful, positively beautiful. I cried. I…I don’t know what to say.

I’m not sure your rhyme scheme adds anything here.

Still, not bad.

i agree, white – i’m still hesitant to go in the non-rhymey way, though. Crying Left was my first ever poem without rhyming, so i’m guessing i should go a little more in that direction..?

Really good, I actually felt like somebody was telling me this to comfort me about something. So you’ve got good writing style.

Yeah this little poem really makes me feel comforted. Thanks so much hug cries

i love the last line!!!

“It’s your life – make up the melody.”

Beautiful!!!!