That was funny. Really. I had to go back and read it a second time because toward the end I got the characters dialogue mixed up. But I love your writing style. Btw I was the person you told to take it to Live Journal. I didnt apprecaite the critisism because you didnt know what you were talking about but now that I look back I can see where you were coming from so any time you want to head on over and read my storys feel free. I made it obvious that they are fiction this time. Thanks for helping me….
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♥Bridget
♥Bridget