It has a great opening line, and I love how you leave it by itself. It needs no accompaniment and urges the reader on. Great work.
So, was the protagonist dictating this as he fell? :)
Maybe, but I would think wind noise might pose a problem, depending on what sort of transit shaft it was. I’d like to think he survived somehow and related this later.
Maybe, but I would think wind noise might pose a problem, depending on what sort of transit shaft it was.
I’d like to think he survived somehow and related this later.
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