Wow! This is a really good description of the girls beauty, especcially that it may be slightly exagerated by the persons personal feelings.

awesome description. can’t wait to see if there’s more

oh oh! please do continue :3 i can’t wait
im a sucker for romance X3

Wow, what a great description.

This is a good story to follow with the old line “Beauty is in the eye of the beholder” only because he felt her beauty is for him. Maybe someone else would not see her that way.

oh wow, is this about a reall girl? if so whats her name? i wish i had a guy to right about me like this, whoever she is she is sure lucky.

Yea… her name’s Emily

wow Emily is really lucky.

yea, most people don’t know me that well, and don’t know how good i can be, but she did…

aww that so sweet. i wish i had someone like you. my bf Spencer dumped me on tuesday. =’(

lol, im just a classic romeo… love notes, poems, the whole nine yards. Most guys don’t want love, and ive had a few try to talk me into dumping her, but i never did =P

aww how long have u been together?

tres months, and we recently broke up. all im going to say.

hello tom, this is your crazy stalker person. i love this story, i actually love all the stories that are about me/ feature my name. lol ttyl!

Here to corrupt the minds of these good people, are we? just keep your venting to yourself from now on, b/c some of us actually care =P