Awww, that’s cute! Very sweet. I can picture them in the rain now.

rain/windowpane
spine/mine
wet/fret
… All candidates for the forced rhyming challenge. =P
But, faerie’s right. Cute.

Anything that rhymes is impressive to me, but the rhythm seems a little forced. Also, this would be better in stanzas, I think. I’m no poetry expert, though.
LoA

thats so cuteee!!!! you’re really good