Comments on Intellectual Broadside [LoA Challenge] by THX 0477

♠Ana Cristina♥

I love your description of the kids, especially Lisa, grinning her lopsided grin, her freckled nose scrunching with satisfaction. Great stuff.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:16:30.
Storykeeper of Fae

Interesting. I like how Lisa intimidates Shane with her big words. It’s fun to do. I want to know what he’s doing with the red lace.
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- Posted 2009-01-12 03:16:30.
Kermitgorf

interesting bunch of kids.
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- Posted 2009-01-12 03:16:30.
Kermitgorf

interesting bunch of kids.
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- Posted 2009-01-12 03:16:30.
Eckhouse

Ah, but what of poor, misunderstood Shane? Find out in a sequel coming soon.
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- Posted 2009-01-12 03:16:30.