i thought that was a good poem
that was depressin though
lalalaa
Billis

Bill is indeed correct about it being depressing. However, aren’t most your poems? xD. Anywayyy, yet again, your writing is fluent and beautiful, well, not in the whole it appears or sounds beautiful way, but all writers should know what I mean. Thus I give this poem a rating fair to my beliefs, and I will now bid you adieu. I love you, darling. ♥

This was a really nice ficlet. Very descriptive and beautiful, in a sad sort of way.

Lovely and descriptive. But depressing but good.