Hot dang, you got me there! Very intense, downright eerie twist to the story. The whole started as a not too out of the ordinary time to leave home sort of story, but now there is so much more there. Funny how different people see different things. I’d thought he was leaving girlfriend, someone else thought it was his mom, but no, it’s his wife! Fun, fun, fun!
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Yeah, I kind of was thinking the same thing…who exactly he was leaving. I didn’t even realize who until I was rereading and thought…hrm!

Broken marriage.. guys struggling… I liked my happy ending, lol.. yours has more depth tho.
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I like how you captured his phyiscal emotions as well as his emotional ones. It was a very vivid picture you illustrated here. I could almost see this take place in my mind. Well done!