Way to ratchet up the tension! You definitely hit on one of my own fears (drowning) so I was biting my nails. Good job!
Without a baby, she might have survived by unbuckling her seatbelt and being ready to swim of the car.With the baby there… ugh. Need Asimovian robo-help.
To swim out of the car. Damn uneditable comments.
I love the details and how the pacing keeps the reader on the edge of his/her seat.
Melia
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