Funny. Good use of dialog. Nice work.
It’s not easy to pull off a pure-dialog piece. I’d say you’ve succeeded.
Thank you for the kind comments!
This dialog kicked butt, kwatz! (But it’s spelled Wookiee)
This dialog kicked butt, kwatz!
(But it’s spelled Wookiee)
Doh! Thanks for the correction. I usually strive for ficlet nirvana, but fortunately I had three extra characters in this one.
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