The descriptions here are quite good, but I think the pacing would benefit if you break this into separate paragraphs.
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Thank you for your comment!
It actually is just the beginning of a longer story I wrote for one of my classes. I still had to cut a lot (paragraphs for example) and you are right it hurts the pacing.
I’ll try to write something that fits the ficlet format better. Difficult to keep it that short, but a great challenge.

The dude reminds me of Kyle Reese…

I thought it was great, her panic versus his calm, and then their desparate situation versus the peaceful lights of civilization. course, doesn’t hurt that I know a road that goes right through a bunch of those big metal windmills. Welcome to ficlets and very glad to see you commenting, which is how I found your stuff.
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whoa – very intense. and i agree with THX , i like the differences between the two characters. makes me wonder why they’re rushing, and where they are..