this is haunting and written well. great job.

Ohhh so sad. So very sad. Absolutely well-written and descriptive.

wow. haunting is a good word to describe your ficlet. One of the best if nt the best in the challenge so far.
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wow… (sits with mouth open) really good

beauifully expressed, mistress hawk. i absoutely love this.
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Excellent. I was half expecting the child to jump. Glad she didn’t, by the way. Perfectly titled.

There’s a ton packed in here, it’s like two ficlets in one. Depth and description is pouring over the top and I’m lapping it up with enjoyment. Excellent.

There’s a ton packed in here, it’s like two ficlets in one. Depth and description is pouring over the top and I’m lapping it up with enjoyment. Excellent.

my computer was being slow and i got click happy, oops.

I agree with all above. Excellent Ficlet. Haunting, sad and very rich. Great work.

Congrats on feature.. this should be the winner gets my vote.
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This is amazing!! congrats on getting featured! If you don’t win I will go crazy!

Congratulations on getting featured, Elsha! This story definitely deserves it because it is beautifully written.

Kickass.

Great message/moral/psychological association captured in that last line. Beautfully written.
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I am SOOO Excited about being featured! Thanks everyone for your comments and stars! Thanks especially Ana, for providing this challenge! Whether or not I’m chosen as the challenge winner, I feel great that made it to the Featured Ficlet!

Wow, wonderful piece! Beautifully written and haunting…

Congrats on winning my challenge! :-)

Thanks Ana! I accept this certification with gratitude and grace. I couldn’t have done it without you for issuing the challenge and the photographer who captured the image. I also would like to thank those responsible for featuring it and those who commented upon it! :)
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